The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The pictures give information about how cement is made and how it is used for concrete production.
Overall, it can be seen that there are five stages in the process of making cement, starting from crushing the materials and finishing with bagging the product. A lot of tools are used for these stages, while only a concrete mixer is needed to create concrete.
At the first stage of cement production, limestone and clay are crushed to become the powder. This this powder is combined in the mixers tools before passing through a rotating heater which has heat applied one end of the tube. In the next stage, this cement is ground before packing in the bags.
It is also shown diagram about concrete production. There are four ingredients to make it. The main ingredient is gravel which accounts for 50% the total, while the figure for sand just is a quarter at the ingredients. Besides, water and cement stand at 10% and 15% respectively. These ingredients are combined in a concrete mixer to form concrete which is the final product if the process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: This
... clay are crushed to become the powder. This this powder is combined in the mixers tools ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79234972678 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51372059802 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.777318638 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7272727273 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323178216094 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116081643307 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781804359065 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207215269461 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807952076235 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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