You are not satisfied with the changing rooms in a sports center that you visit. Write a letter to the manager.
1. What the problem is.
2. How do you feel about the problem.
3. What steps you want the manager to take.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about the problems that all the members are encountering in changing rooms. I have a life time membership of club.
Firstly, the bolts on the door and windows are all broken as a result of which anyone can budge into the room while changing. To add to it, the curtains are so dirty that they smell very badly. The attached urinals also stink. The dustbin are also very dirty. There are no camera facility in front of lockers rooms.
On the behalf of all the members, I request you to look into the matter urgently. we feel very disgusted at the service we receiving because we paid a huge membership fees and we feel that we deserve the best.
I would suggest you to call in plumber and carpenter to rectify the sanitary and wooden fittings. The curtains need to be changed. Last but not the least, I would urge you to make regular inspections of changing rooms so that the staff in charge of the mopping and cleaning do their properly.
Hoping a prompt action from you regarding this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Xyz.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...ncountering in changing rooms. I have a life time membership of club. Firstly, the bol...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...t you to look into the matter urgently. we feel very disgusted at the service we r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63212435233 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36798335375 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626943005181 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.045597561 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.8571428571 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7857142857 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194127969195 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495618510428 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609626618006 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101513648314 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536579299215 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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