You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your latter
- Say why he/she would not enjoy going to collage
- Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
- Suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Parth,
It ‘s being a long time to know about you. I got your letter last week, and I was very happy by knowing that you are good. I am writing this latter in reply of your letter to provide appropriate advice for your decision towards job or collage.
I know, you already have a diploma degree in computer stream. Nowadays, demand of computer engineers are extremely high in India specially in the Ahmedabad city. So, you should start preparation to apply for concern job without wasting a time in further study. The salary slab of person who completed diploma and having a Master degree in Computer Science are same. Thus, it is better to get the job in big company and increase your field experience.
You have very good knowledge of mobile application development. Therefore, you should apply for Software Developer position. Currently there are many vacancy available in multinational companies at Ahmedabad city which offers you attractive salary package.
Hope that the provided information will be beneficial for you to take a decision.
Lots of love,
Kalpesh Sangani.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... your decision towards job or collage. I know, you already have a diploma degree...
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Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'vacancies'?
Suggestion: vacancies
...oper position. Currently there are many vacancy available in multinational companies at...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... beneficial for you to take a decision. Lots of love, Kalpesh Sangani.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04419889503 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67783164756 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67955801105 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6848803677 44.8134815571 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.2307692308 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 4.34317383033 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226450499451 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741088676472 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579927507011 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130579453478 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603755400856 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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