The system of rubbish collection in your area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors.
Write a letter to local council. In your letter
- describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
- explain how this is affecting you and your neighbors
- suggest what should be done about the problem.
Dear Sir,
I am a citizen of 'Sadbhav Residency' in Nikol area - a west zone of the city. I am writing this letter to make aware about the issue which is facing by all the members of my society.
The municipality service regarding garbage collection is not maintaining properly in my area. The cleaners are not collecting the rubbish on specific time as well as they are not regular. Apart from this, the strength of the worker is very less as compare to the count of flats. Most of the residents are belonging to the private jobs, so they have to reach office on time. Because of irregular service they have wait till the arrival of rubbish collector van and clean the dustbin.
If the cleaner come on proper time in the morning and collect the garbage then it would be very helpful for us. Moreover, the inspection on sweeper on regular basis improves the services provided by the municipality.
Hoping for fastest action on the issue we are facing.
Yours Faithfully,
Kalpesh Sangani.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...well as they are not regular. Apart from this, the strength of the worker is very...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...the strength of the worker is very less as compare to the count of flats. Most of ...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[4]
Message: The verb belong is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'belong'
Suggestion: belong
...e count of flats. Most of the residents are belonging to the private jobs, so they have to re...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e count of flats. Most of the residents are belonging to the private jobs, so they have to re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75287356322 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53635766486 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.2803326533 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.1818181818 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160996062905 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557552613265 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438480129057 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662089406449 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284116817051 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.