Effects of Internet
These days, there is an opinion about the use of internet that changes people behavior significantly.
Some changes gave a positive side to people live, but some others are not. In my opinion, in most case,
the internet gave more advantages.
Firstly, the internet helps people communicate each other. In example, before the internet is being a
common technology in my life, my parents cannot contact their far-away family easily. However,
nowadays from the phone application that connected to the internet, they can call my aunties that life
hundreds kilometers anytime just by a click from their phone.
Moreover, information is being easily accessible with the internet. Over the past few decades, news is
published in the newspaper which are costly for some people. Presently, news and information are
shared digitalized in the website which mostly free to read and could be read by everyone. This website
is running because people are connected to the internet.
On the top of that, internet makes people live efficiently. For instance, when I go back home from the
office, I usually try to find the way that are not in traffic jam and choose a modes of transportation by
looking to the street condition which shown in the online maps. By this process, I can arrive at home
faster and can safe my time for another activity.
For that reasons, I believe even though some people think the internet gave a negative impact to our
lives there are more positive benefits that can be gain from the used of internet. Communication,
information, and live efficiently are some of the good impact of it.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-10-11 | zanzendegi | 73 | view |
| 2024-09-18 | wholemilk | 89 | view |
| 2024-04-17 | SUSANNA PETROSYAN | 89 | view |
| 2024-02-21 | MEBC Class | 89 | view |
| 2024-02-04 | MinyiChu | 84 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 78, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a mode' or simply 'modes'?
Suggestion: a mode; modes
... that are not in traffic jam and choose a modes of transportation by looking to the st...
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Line 18, column 39, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... information, and live efficiently are some of the good impact of it.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02592592593 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68624755485 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9791621436 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20405632286 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850538489436 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733262182176 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772036077864 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846221441139 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.