You are currently working for a prestigious company and happy with everything. However, a far better opportunity has come your way and you have to leave your current job and move abroad. write a letter to your current employer, in your letter you must
introduce the matter
describe the new offer
what you feel about the situation.
Dear sir or Madam,
I am Harry Martin, software engineer working with your prestigious organisation from last seven years. With due respect, please accept this letter as my resign application as I have received a better job opportunity from another IT company. I will serve the notice period of one month starting from today.
Firstly, I am truly grateful to your organisation for the commendable experience and knowledge that I gained worked here. It would definitely help me in my future job. I also thankyou for acknowledging and appraising my efforts from time to time. My new job title is Senior project manager and my responsibilities involves managing an offshore as well as onsite team of fifty members. I will take project requirements from the clients and ensure timely delivery of the same. I am very excited to face the new challenges.
Although, I have got an incredible opportunity to work in America and earn handsome salary but I have mixed feelings. I am upset for leaving such a great company where the employee's policy were very friendly and rewarding. I would always miss the professional work environment and cooperative staff members.
I hope you will be happy with my new work offer and release me with all the paper work on 22nd june.
Yours Sincerely,
Harry Martin.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir or Madam, I am Harry Martin, software engineer wor...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
... better job opportunity from another IT company. I will serve the notice period of one ...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
... leaving such a great company where the employees policy were very friendly and rewarding...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nment and cooperative staff members. I hope you will be happy with my new work...
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Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e with all the paper work on 22nd june. Yours Sincerely, Harry Martin.
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...work on 22nd june. Yours Sincerely, Harry Martin.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00917431193 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88286603739 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660550458716 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6758255205 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202849513916 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062185102489 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557844800942 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11226525598 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355427347296 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.