The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries.
The linear representation model illustrates the arrival of tourists at five countries between 1995 and 2010.The five countries are Brazil,the USA,Malaysia,France.
Overall,it can be incurred that the number of excursionists have increased in all the countries despite the USA being ahead of the pack.
In detail,while the USA witnessed 70 million visits in 1995,it climbed up to as many as 90 million visits in 2005 adding a feather to its cap.
Although in 1995,only 30 million tourists paid a visit to France,it peaked twice during 2000,standing on par with the United States.
However,the sightseeing number in Brazil,Egypt and Malaysia increased,it did not rise above 40 million by the end of the day.While in Malaysia,the figure double in 2010 from 20 million in 1995,Brazil and Egypt faced a marginal growth(9 million to 15 million).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...at five countries between 1995 and 2010.The five countries are Brazil,the USA,Malay...
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Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...5 and 2010.The five countries are Brazil,the USA,Malaysia,France. Overall,it can be...
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Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Malaysia
...10.The five countries are Brazil,the USA,Malaysia,France. Overall,it can be incurred tha...
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...Brazil,the USA,Malaysia,France. Overall,it can be incurred that the number of excu...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
... USA being ahead of the pack. In detail,while the USA witnessed 70 million visits in ...
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... million tourists paid a visit to France,it peaked twice during 2000,standing on pa...
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Suggestion: , the
... on par with the United States. However,the sightseeing number in Brazil,Egypt and ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Egypt
...However,the sightseeing number in Brazil,Egypt and Malaysia increased,it did not rise ...
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...r in Brazil,Egypt and Malaysia increased,it did not rise above 40 million by the en...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
... above 40 million by the end of the day.While in Malaysia,the figure double in 2010 f...
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Suggestion: , the
... by the end of the day.While in Malaysia,the figure double in 2010 from 20 million i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 709.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 133.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33082706767 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36306300494 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699248120301 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7521122517 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.8 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0571155013669 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378863519491 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585844787116 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0378863519491 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585844787116 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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