Task 1 IELTS Writing Model - Cambridge 8 Test 4 Goods transported in UK (1974 – 2002)
The linear representation gives us information about the transportation of goods in the UK(1974-2002) by four mains of transport.Transporation via roadways has been the greatest above-board the rest of the facilities.
The commutation of goods through roadways started off at 65 million tonnes during 1974,gradually achieving a peak at 98 million at 2002.
While waterways and railways initiated at the same level(40 million),water mode gradually increased its way up by remaining stable and reached the zenith of nearly 60 million during 2002.Whereas,railways fluctuated between 20-40 million throughout the time period.
It is easily seen that,very few resources are sent through pipeline.Eventhough,the shift of goods has remained less,the mode of commute has surged up to value of nearly 20 million especially between 1194 to 2002.
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- Task 1 IELTS Writing Model - Cambridge 8 Test 4 Goods transported in UK (1974 – 2002) 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Transporation
... UK1974-2002 by four mains of transport.Transporation via roadways has been the greatest abov...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , water
...ys initiated at the same level40 million,water mode gradually increased its way up by ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Whereas
...zenith of nearly 60 million during 2002.Whereas,railways fluctuated between 20-40 milli...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...zenith of nearly 60 million during 2002.Whereas,railways fluctuated between 20-40 milli...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , railways
...of nearly 60 million during 2002.Whereas,railways fluctuated between 20-40 million throug...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , very
...e time period. It is easily seen that,very few resources are sent through pipeline...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Eventhough
...few resources are sent through pipeline.Eventhough,the shift of goods has remained less,th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ces are sent through pipeline.Eventhough,the shift of goods has remained less,the mo...
^^^^
Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ugh,the shift of goods has remained less,the mode of commute has surged up to value ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 124.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79838709677 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33699396548 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.01683340112 2.65546596893 151% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693548387097 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1462899915 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.75 112.824112599 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126596156271 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805841727782 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440343132679 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805841727782 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440343132679 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.95 11.4140731707 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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