You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude on your extraordinary effort which participate in making our latest birthday party memorable for my grandfather and all his guests. Last week, on 26th of November, the birthday party of my lovely grandfather has held at your great hotel. There were too many an elderly visitors in that event.
What makes our occasion to be a great is the spectacular professionalism that all staff have. I really was not expecting such an astonishing organization provided by your employee. they were allocating a special path for the visitors in order to avert any confusion. moreover, they specialized a plenty of parking for our attendees. The dinner was extremely delicious with wide range of various options.
On above of that, hotel has provided a unique services that really surprised me a lot, they offered a multi-sories chocolate cake with big photo of my grandfather by only $40. It's really amazing move as they helped me a lot, since I will never be able to provide such a cake in same price and even shape.
Finally, your work was so remarkable and you really made our day.
Good luck and best regards,
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ous with wide range of various options. On above of that, hotel has provided a u...
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...ch a cake in same price and even shape. Finally, your work was so remarkable and...
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...remarkable and you really made our day. Good luck and best regards, Bilal ...
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...ur day. Good luck and best regards, Bilal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92537313433 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81664987123 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5518677272 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211002572998 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662832298461 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660689006124 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932801047013 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993314590043 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.