Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I completely disagree, I guess that segregated schools it is almost a criminal against the modern society. Kids are not born being prejudiced they was taught to be. Independently what kind of prejudiced, whatever: gender bias, racism, financial etc, any type of those. I guess that if the kids starts to go often in a place as a school separated by gender, of course the kid will ask for: why does not any girls here? It is difficult to me believe a positive answer for that question. When this kids being adult and leave the school, likely he/she goes to feeling different from the others. It is exactly at this point that the prejudice starts.
Usually, childhood is the time to learn a lot things about human behavior and one of those is gender differences between boys and girls. If a kid has studied in a school just with girls or boys, this kid had a high probability to be a prejudiced person in the future, for sure. But we can not blamed he/she for this attitude because he/she was taught how to be like that. So, act with a gender bias would be pretty normal to then.
Thinking about gender bias, I guess that prejudiced with girls is more intense than with boys. Maybe about boys this prejudice almost do not exist. All of it was created by a society and a society is built by people, conclusion people are prejudiced (one with another). Personally, I got upset when I see a woman acting with bias by herself, with this negative thought, like: Okay, but we could not do this because we are women and this is for mens. I can say that in general, we do not want to be treated with privileges, as many think. We just want to be equal.
For example, a couple days ago I was watching a YouTube video about a Brazilian bodybuilding athlete that went to Kuwait for training in one of the best gyms around the world. It is like a temple specialized in build muscles and athletes with a strong mindset of champion. But, an interesting point beyond that was a very different culture that shocks me a lot. Mainly about the genre differences which is pretty normal in that country. For instance, the girls usually goes to a specific school, just for her. Usually the woman needs to walk one step behind her husband, there was a different gym and a bunch of places that is only for men. It is really a shock of cultures but, there are some situations that can be worse, because depends of the family a girl can not goes to school, normally just the boys goes to school.
For those reasons, I guess that specific schools separated by gender will reflect in prejudice in all fields of life. And it is a shame that naïve kids could be taught to look at the gender bias as a normal event.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, really, so, then, for example, for instance, i guess, in general, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 15.1003584229 219% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2200.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43548387097 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41005942798 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1999624658 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6153846154 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0949766226166 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299895553034 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314276220269 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585873562692 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294058354428 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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