Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
family: Tahoma, sans-serif, Arial, Helvetica; font-size: 13px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;">In this era, the virtues of academic achievements do not conceal to anybody, and most families want their children to pass the education process very well. while some people believe these days parents are as an assistant for teachers to follow up their children's education activity like the assignments. others stand at the other side of the continuum, holding the view that a teacher's duty is more critical today because parents' involvement in the educational process of children is reduced. As far as I concerned, I believe that parents are more engaged in their youngsters' academic activity than in the past. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are illustrated in the following paragraphs.
family: Tahoma, sans-serif, Arial, Helvetica; font-size: 13px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial;">family: Tahoma, sans-serif, Arial, Helvetica; font-size: 13px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;">The first and most paramount reason which is worth mentioning is that fathers and mothers are more educated than their past generation and can more active role as a teacher in children learning progress. In the past, most parents obligate their family members to learn skills like farming, accounting, and crafts like these, which they believed was good for children to find a suitable future job. Through time, peoples have realized the importance of science and have motivated to learn knowledge, which are caused human beings going to more literacy. Not only educated parents can aid their children efficiently, but also parents can be an idol for their family members to persuade them towards success in education. In other words, parents can be a second teacher for their youngsters.
family: Tahoma, sans-serif, Arial, Helvetica; font-size: 13px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial;">family: Tahoma, sans-serif, Arial, Helvetica; font-size: 13px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;">Furthermore, new schools encourage families to have participation in the school's program for improving the connection between the education firm and parents. most little children are naughty and do not reliable for connection points between teachers and family, which is making trouble for teachers to send messages or invitation to school for parents. when parents connect directly to teachers, interactions of these two sides have many benefits for students. For instance, when I was a student in junior school, my tutor gave me a meeting invitation letter and asked me to deliver this envelope to my father. after a while, I lost this letter and my father did not attend to this meeting, which was about my progress in learning and estimation for my future job. after that, my teacher thought that my father did not pay attention to my curriculum and removed his name in any school invitation.
family: Tahoma, sans-serif, Arial, Helvetica; font-size: 13px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial;">family: Tahoma, sans-serif, Arial, Helvetica; font-size: 13px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;">In conclusion, having the aforementioned reasons and examples into an account, I believe that parents’ interaction in children education program has been increased from the past. this is because more educated parents then their past generation and today school's firm want a better connection to parents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Family
family: Tahoma, sans-serif, Arial, Helvetica; ...
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Suggestion: While
...o pass the education process very well. while some people believe these days parents ...
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Suggestion: Others
...ducation activity like the assignments. others stand at the other side of the continuu...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
... the continuum, holding the view that a teachers duty is more critical today because par...
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Suggestion: Family
...lustrated in the following paragraphs. family: Tahoma, sans-serif, Arial, Helvetica; ...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to progress'
Suggestion: to progress
... role as a teacher in children learning progress. In the past, most parents obligate the...
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Suggestion: Family
...a second teacher for their youngsters. family: Tahoma, sans-serif, Arial, Helvetica; ...
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...between the education firm and parents. most little children are naughty and do not ...
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...es or invitation to school for parents. when parents connect directly to teachers, i...
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... to deliver this envelope to my father. after a while, I lost this letter and my fath...
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...rning and estimation for my future job. after that, my teacher thought that my father...
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...ved his name in any school invitation. family: Tahoma, sans-serif, Arial, Helvetica; ...
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Suggestion: This
...ogram has been increased from the past. this is because more educated parents then t...
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
.... this is because more educated parents then their past generation and today schools...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 35.0 8.0752688172 433% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5248.0 1977.66487455 265% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 737.0 407.700716846 181% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.12075983718 4.8611393121 146% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.21034969277 4.48103885553 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.92847796402 2.67179642975 184% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.354138398915 0.524837075471 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1382.4 618.680645161 223% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.51630824373 125% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 40.0 20.1344086022 199% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 369.715844339 48.9658058833 755% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 291.555555556 100.406767564 290% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.9444444444 20.6045352989 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0857591151986 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765308628854 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701770042464 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883993644945 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593683008881 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.6 11.7677419355 277% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.5 58.1214874552 9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.1575268817 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 24.9 10.9000537634 228% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 10.002688172 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.0537634409 179% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.247311828 215% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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