Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are those of the opinion that disclosure of information in scientific research, business and the academic world is acceptable. Nevertheless, there are those who oppose this view and instead claim that information is too critical to be disclosed instantly.
Those who support the notion that total disclosure of information can be done is linked to the provision of additional knowledge in terms of science, trade and education. As more people become aware, suggestions, recommendations and support are provided from various resources to make new improvements and discoveries for a better quality of life. This is apparent in some countries in Asia, and Africa, plastics have already been replaced with biodegradable packaging. Aside from this, global awareness is highly regarded in keeping the safety of humanity because this prevents catastrophic events and world crisis from taking place. In fact, disease outbreaks like Ebola virus and extreme weather conditions like Hurricane Katrina in the United States may jeopardize the community. Instituting precautionary measures activates the primary level of prevention.
However, there are those who subscribe to the belief and assert that there should be limitations in information dissemination. In the field of business and technology, data privacy is well-highlighted. Duplication of information could lead to a more advanced finding or a similar one which puts the intellectual property rights of the originator at risk. Furthermore, such information can pave way to the increasing value of an item. The final output is usually what the consumers want to see. In 200 BC, China hid an important information on the process of making porcelain for 1000 years which made it a highly valuable product in world trade and was even termed as white gold.
In summary, although there are countless reasons why information needs to be shared completely, I do not hold the same view. Data privacy is important at some aspects as disclosing information may change the outcome of a process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, in fact, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38198757764 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10616299063 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61801242236 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1966539765 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.3125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245074394359 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695533344739 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648209963282 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161316322129 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745705663864 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.