The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart gives information on the proportion of people who regularly exercises in 2010. The report covers the male and female Australians in six different age groups.
Overall, it can be seen that most of the women who actively participated in physical fitness were from the age group of 45 to 54 while the least belong to 65 and over. It is also clear that men ages 15 to 24 were the most active than those who are 35 to 44 years old who were observed as the least.
In detail, Australian women ages 35 to 44, 45 to 54 and 55 to 64 years old exercise regularly with over 52 % of them doing physical activities. This was closely followed by those who were 25 to 34 with 48.9 %. Those who were 15 to 24 years old belonged to 47.7 % while the age group of 65 and over had 47.1 % which only had 1.8 % difference from that of the age group of 25 to 34.
Among Australian men, 52.8 % belong to 15 to 24 years old who were mostly active in doing exercise activities. This was closely followed by the age groups 65 and over and 55 to 64 with 46.7 % and 45.1 %, respectively. Meanwhile, age groups 45 to 54 and 25 to 34 had 43.1 % and 42.2 %, each. The lowest rate was seen for the age group of 35 to 44 at 39.5 % which is 13 % less that of the female counterpart within the same age group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13492063492 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3154940846 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480158730159 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1498259658 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7272727273 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313732429159 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13233402709 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536467749925 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221105157739 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398871227631 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.97 11.4140731707 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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