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For years, nations have exploited natural resources in hope for economic gains. More and more natural resources are being sacrificed to meet the increasing demand for urbanisation and industrialisation. With drastically changing environmental conditions, it has become extremely crucial, now a days, to preserve what little wilderness areas we are left.
Dwindling wilderness and augmenting industries leads to air pollution which causes damage to both life and property. The increasing concentration of air pollutants has led to an increase in breathing problems, skin diseases and eye infections. Air pollution has been on the top of the list of the environmental problems being faced by the nations worldwide. Nations are trying to come up with ways where they can reduce the amount of pollutants being released into the environment every year. By preserving the natural reserves, is one way, we can prevent exacerbating the issue of air pollution.
In recent years, due to global warming, we have experienced a dramatic change into environment. Global warming has led to a number of environmental issues such as melting of glaciers, change in timing of seasonal events and increase in sea level. Deforestation being the main cause of global warming urges nations to protect forests and prevent any further activity that might lead to a change in the natural state of such areas.
But this does not mean we can not benefit from wilderness areas at all. By preserving the natural state of these areas we can still gain economic benefits. For instance, wildlife sanctuaries and natural reserves provide both economic and environmental benefits. They preserve the natural state of the areas along with providing for great tourist spots supporting the tourist industry and thus providing economic gains.
Thus, I agree that nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state to prevent any further damage to the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...tions, it has become extremely crucial, now a days, to preserve what little wilderness are...
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Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...s, it has become extremely crucial, now a days, to preserve what little wilderness are...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...environment. Global warming has led to a number of environmental issues such as m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 310.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34838709677 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96742635068 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535483870968 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9979207972 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.625 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9375 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28546340431 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985814565407 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906994536895 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180733770469 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107980245477 0.0667264976115 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.