You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it,
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing to ask you to help me in making it possible to work in the head office of the company for a short period of time. I am looking forward to improving my résumé by working in there.
In order to accentuate my knowledge and international work experience, I am eager to do job in our head office situated in Canada. It would benefit me to learn how it works at the head office which manages its many office branches located in different countries.
As you know that the project on which I was working has been halted for six months due to few operational faults. Other minor level office responsibilities can be looked after and performed by Miss. Anita as she has showed her consent to do so for me. So I believe that during the time away from office, work related to me will be carried out by her effectively.
To accomplish my dream of working in the head office, I would need your help as well as support. If you recommend my name to the head office, I will be allowed NOC from HR department. Could you please give your recommendations?
I would be grateful to you if you could help me out in this matter. I look forward seeing your response as early as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Jack Marie.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... head office of the company for a short period of time. I am looking forward to improving my r...
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Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...king has been halted for six months due to few operational faults. Other minor lev...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4298245614 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68003272514 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0675349677 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1428571429 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36457621405 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117853141301 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679356900777 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194331429747 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463103631829 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.