Some people become famous when they are young age.
Do you think this is positive or negative?
In today’s era, it has become quite easier for the people to become famous and as a result everyone aspires for popularity because they deem fame as a symbol of success, which makes them to toil with tenacity. Furthermore, it has been seen that some people become famous in an early age of their life, which certainly has both pros and cons. Thus, I am going to deliberate both positive and negative views of this statement.
To begin with, people always yearn for compliments and praising words, as they consider popularity as a matter of recognition and prestige for them, but popularity at a young age can result plethora positive things for the individual. Firstly, people can get many ladders of success with resort to popularity as well as they become more responsible and particular about every action or word of them. On the top of that, it makes people to fulfill all their requirements, as they can earn money easily because of their credibility, which comes with popularity.
On the other hand, one cannot deny the negative sides of becoming popular at a young age due to myriad reasons. Firstly, it can make someone to distract conveniently from their values, education and so on, which are very imperative for someone to have a stronghold on success. In addition, people can indulge themselves in misdeeds such as intoxications and many more, on account of money flow, which they get because of popularity, and hence fatal for someone’s growth. Furthermore, an individual finds himself/herself confine in a certain domain, owing to which he/she faces manifold problems in going somewhere. For instance, it has been reported in many surveys that young people often get distract from their goal by the lure of popularity of someone.
In conclusion, I opine that an individual gets everything at an appropriate time, therefore one should never forget the true path of success, which comes by hard work.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-08-19 | kuldeep sharma | 100 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.5418719212 9% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 318.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98427672956 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76425111259 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.3087124251 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.083333333 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.25397266985 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221621356424 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089054887125 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654962426759 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136138751528 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100405351445 0.0609392437508 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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