at thepresent time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, comparade with the number of older people.
do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
The population of elderly people in several country is concernedfacing a decrease i total. By the contrast, an increase of young adults is happening in this modern era so that it brings twofold advantages and i think the government should offer more education in other that the youths can be developed faster.
To begin with the role of elders in giving advise and opportunity for the next generation related to survive in this modern life. their struggles that brings benefit to the new lives nowadays. For instance, the veterans who had a combat with the colonizer in order to liberate the country. nowadays, even though their powers are less than young people, at least developing an organisation to protect them by the authority in which way to respect their sacrifices.
On one side, firstly higher population of youth generation is a power of country. Moreover, a lot of youngers having the fresh critical thinking that can improve the social life, not only to their country but even for the world generally.thus, the government should pay more attantion in increasing the fasilities for those modern generation who will be obviously respected in universe entirely. Secondly, young adults is phisically strongger so that it makes them easier to earn money to survive in this days.
To summary, the government should not deny the veterans because they have a huge role for independence of the country to respect their struggles. However the authority either not avoid the potency having by freshmen who are increasing in the middle of population and protect the as well as propiding the advanced fasilities in order that improves their achievements for the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, at least, for instance, i think, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09454545455 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82895536016 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549090909091 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.7911952462 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.363636364 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3636363636 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107082930547 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438328218459 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264078629785 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692599567017 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278352470782 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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