You recently read an article in a newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to inform him about it. Use the following points.
1. What is the article about?
2. What is the error?
3. What you expect the editor to do?
Write not less than 150 words.
Dear Mr. Patel,
I read an article about the tree plantation activity of your social group in 'Times Of India' newspaper printed on 15th Aug 2019. I am writing this letter to inform you regarding the misprinting of the group name.
I read a news of a tree plantation activity done by organisation- 'Uday Foundation' which is currently you are running. There were also a photograph of you in the paper. I also saw that to my family members and they were also appreciated your work. But, the organisation name mentioned in that was 'Happy charity' instead of 'Uday Foundation 'which was wrong. So, I thought that it was printing mistake, however I like to shared this with you as well.
The media should take care about this kind of minor errors because it happen, sometime the real credit goes others by minor mistake. I expected from editor that before printing the final news on the paper it should be double check by a senior authorities so the chances of issue can be reduce and improves the quality of news along with the reputation.
Kindly request to refer the newspaper of above mentioned date and inform for the same to the editor.
Yours Faithfully,
Kalpesh Sangani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Patel, I read an article about the tree plantat...
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Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...sprinting of the group name. I read a news of a tree plantation activity done by o...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 337, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Happy charity instead of Uday Foundation which was wrong. So, I thought that it w...
^^
Line 4, column 448, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I like to shared this with you as well. The media should take care about this ki...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 71, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happens'?
Suggestion: happens
...ut this kind of minor errors because it happen, sometime the real credit goes others b...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ame to the editor. Yours Faithfully, Kalpesh Sangani
^^^
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours Faithfully, Kalpesh Sangani
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, regarding, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74757281553 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52311399883 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621359223301 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6186643038 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9090909091 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200828788154 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072231591388 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612786732309 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117319261125 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793746370213 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.