Nowadays, families move to different countries for work. Some people think it has a negative effect on children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is unquestionable fact that, world is becaming a golab village. People like to imgrate at the place where they can find a better job opportunities. Some people are in favor of this migration whereas some have diffrent perception. Before stating my opinion, both the views are justified further in ensuring pharagraphs.
Among the various view points, the foremost one is, moving to the developed country offers many benefits regarding education of the children. In many countries education is provided at no cost. For instance, many countries have law, the expense of primary education is provided by the government. Moreover, teenager can get the chance to be a part of multiculture. Each country has its own culture and tradition, by moving to another nation people can get to know about new culture.
Apart from these, there are many other benefits also parents can get. To begin with, the basic facilities are providing free by the nation. Government provides no cost services in many important sectors. For example, citizen of the country do not have to pay a single penny for the facilities of hospital, schools, universities and many other public services which are the part of daily needs of a person. Furthermore, youngsters can get the better job opportunities by getting a good degree. The qualified job options are more in developed countries as compare to developing or under developed countries. As a result parent do not have to be much varied regarding career of their children.
In Conclusion, I believe, to get the better life and career, it is good to choose the option of overseas. It gives various cultural as well as educational and financial merits to the public. For the growth of life people should select this option.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, whereas, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0412371134 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81746288242 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1106233605 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2105263158 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3157894737 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15789473684 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170334714643 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474522495699 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433913707819 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101090449219 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348330381239 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.