You have just read an article in an inernational travel magazie which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter
- Correct the information in the article
- Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
- Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir,
I am a citizen of Ahmedabad city, located in state Gujarat, India. I am writing this latter to draw your attention regarding the article printed in 'Beauty of Wolrd' magazine of July 2019 edition.
In your last edition of magazine there was information of my home town and it represented that the beauty of lack was amazing at Ahmedabad. But, there is not any lack in my town. The picture displayed in that was of Gandhinagar Lack which is 50km far from my home town. I assume that information was misprinted. There is a huge lack associated at Gandhingar and it is a very famous picnic place also. So, visitor should not confused realted to the place and geographocal location when they come to visit the place from the foreign. It is very important as a reputation of the city as well.
It is magazine's responsibility to provide fact and approriate information to the reader. Specially when the audiance are from out of the country. The editior should print the updated information in the next adition and provide the accurate information about theplace.
Yours Faithfully,
Kalpesh Sangani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... latter to draw your attention regarding the article printed in Beauty of Wolrd m...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your last edition of magazine there was information of my home town and it repre...
^^
Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ar and it is a very famous picnic place also. So, visitor should not confused realte...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'confuse'
Suggestion: confuse
...cnic place also. So, visitor should not confused realted to the place and geographocal l...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Yours Faithfully, Kalpesh Sangani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89947089947 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80566001417 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57671957672 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6690905921 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2307692308 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151336767257 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521260305169 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418366943922 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888290281702 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170633176195 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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