• Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Computers, modern innovation, has become a basic to all humans and essential to preform day to day activities. There are certain people with rigorous use of computer are and faded with use of computer and complains about making their life difficult. But in general speaking, I believe that computer has made life easier and more convenient. It has increased the basic of living in human and aided continuously to make people's lives convenient.
First of all, without computer we cannot imagine a student's life. It helps student in every sector, online tutorial, class routine and all required materials are online and there is no need to be upset if one miss one's class. For instance, in this summer I missed my class for a week at university, I had to see my mother at hospital during her surgery, and it's hard to catch up to the courses if there were not computers. I used the online recordings provided by university and get along with the subject being taught.
In addition to computer being used as basic for student, it's the modern information system to all general problems. Many of us are aware about the health issues, new and what's happening on the neighborhood through computer. For example, about a month a ago a critical case of pregnancy came to village hospital about 50km far from city hospital, there was only health assistance in the village hospital but successfully delivered a child with the help of doctor far ways through constant online instructions.
Finally, computer are responsible for making the world smaller. People now can fulfill their requirement right through their home through online purchase with variety of option and selection. Their requirement are not bound by the boundaries and imagination with in their mind. For example a physically disabled neighbor of mine ordered a electric self-propulsion wheelchair through the online and now we both go evening walk enjoying the fresh air of nature.
By the way of conclusion, based on the argument expressed above, computers, gift of god to modern human, has certainly without doubt made the life easier and more convenient. Those are the people who thins computers have made life more complex and stressful who either are not familiar with computer, who should learn to use computer and sue advantage from it, or are people with massive use and has tampered with computer system to whom we cannot do anything.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...l, without computer we cannot imagine a students life. It helps student in every sector,...
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Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...here is no need to be upset if one miss ones class. For instance, in this summer I m...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...mputer being used as basic for student, its the modern information system to all ge...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... aware about the health issues, new and whats happening on the neighborhood through c...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...gh computer. For example, about a month a ago a critical case of pregnancy came t...
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Line 4, column 338, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...cally disabled neighbor of mine ordered a electric self-propulsion wheelchair thr...
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Line 4, column 461, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... walk enjoying the fresh air of nature. By the way of conclusion, based on the a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, for example, for instance, in addition, in general, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98009950249 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69474983833 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554726368159 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7803849162 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.764705882 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6470588235 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23231243339 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796352140322 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989068643456 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137712724675 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121307539738 0.0645574589148 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.