Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends.
In your letter:
1. Thank them for the photos and for the holiday
2. Explain why you didn’t write earlier
3. Invite them to come and stay with you.
Dear Louis and Jeanne,
Thanks so much for the photos that you sent me on early last month. They’re so beautiful, which reminded me of my great time I spent with you guys. I really appreciated your warm welcome during my two weeks holiday in Paris.
I sincerely apologize for the delay in response. I’ve noticed that you sent them to me on 10th last month. Unfortunately, I’d already been in Singapore due to some urgent issues with my client at that time. I’ve just come back this morning and saw your mail on my desk.
I’m kind of sure that you’ve been never in Vietnam. Why don’t you visit my home town for your next holiday in October? It would be great time in here because the weather isn’t too hot, and we’re preparing for a music festival on that month as I know you’re really interested in Vietnamese music.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Warm wishes,
Thao
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been never
... I'm kind of sure that you've never been in Vietnam. Why don't you visit my...
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Line 7, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... really interested in Vietnamese music. I look forward to hearing from you. ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85093167702 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59441521672 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689440993789 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5508390074 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0833333333 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4166666667 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365176966683 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132175000906 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784694819181 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176068269385 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103979370717 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.