Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing( for ex cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modern era, Technology has become an essential part of everyday life. These days more and more inventions are being developed to enhance the automation, computers, and machinery, etc., an increasing concern for many people around the world is that the advantages of the technology are outweighing the disadvantages. However, some consider the automation of this technology as impeccably progressed in the present days with several pros and cons. Time and time again, the possible proofs have emerged out stronger in terms of putting forth the fact that the advantages of this kind of technology are having an equal number of disadvantages. I can express my views further in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, the cell phone has a plethora of benefits if we use it in a righteous way. As long as one can able to use the technology in a proper way, its disadvantages never harm an individual. I can provide a good illustration of my uncle, who was accused in land litigation with his friend. Police officers freed my uncle with a proof recorded from cell phone tracking that has a conversation between my uncle and his friend in which my uncle sounds innocent. As a result, my uncle got acquitted from the case. Secondly, Cell phone tracking may have few drawbacks too. For instance, if a person is in private conversation with his family members or friends, then there is a chance of misusing the technology by exposing the audio clips by his/her enemies intentionally. Sometimes that conversation might unknowingly leak out. Consequently, we can observe that there is the same number of advantages as disadvantages in this sort of development in mobile phones tracking.
In addition to this, technology has made enormous changes in what we do at present days. Innovations have come up fast in capturing what we do in any fields whether it may be a hospital, working offices, public places, and even private places, etc., this type of progression is sometimes appreciated. Take, for instance, if a person is found guilty in a criminal case, he can be captured if the surroundings are installed with security cameras. If there are no cameras around, then the person will not be declared as accused in the murder case. As we can see how the security cameras influencing the evidence here which really benefit however all the places are not covered by cameras which comes under a disadvantage of technology.
In summation, the advantages of modernization in saying and doing have an equal number of pros and cons. Weighing up all the facts involved in the advantages and disadvantages, it would be seen that the disadvantages are same in number compared to advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a righteous way" with adverb for "righteous"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...has a plethora of benefits if we use it in a righteous way. As long as one can able to use the tec...
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Line 2, column 131, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...g as one can able to use the technology in a proper way, its disadvantages never harm an indivi...
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Line 4, column 222, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: same
...ould be seen that the disadvantages are same in number compared to advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in addition, kind of, sort of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2230.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97767857143 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99898672833 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524553571429 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2725389462 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.19047619 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253073535724 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660926613355 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472350673597 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143779970395 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357987919584 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 10.002688172 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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