Some people think that people who are over 60 years old should not work ans should be made to retire. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Old age is one of the best and last stage of the everyone's life. Above 50 years people are consider as senior citizen. every person work up to 60 years of age for their livelihood. after that they need to take rest. In this topic mixed discussion is going on among the people.
Firstly when comes to agree point, yes after sixty years everybody should retire from their respective positions. Because after 60 each person will be less active in work and it leads to the delay of work. In India the government following this type of rule, so it gives opportunity to get the post for upcoming eligible young generation. If younger people presence makes the work very fast and in smooth way. it shows the quick-growing in the economy of the country and reduce of unemployment of the nation, when people retired at the age of 60.
Secondly, while comes to disagree, one major problem faces after their retirement is running of their families and their livelihoods. this effect proceeds to the death of the lot of people. Some governments giving the money through pension policy for running the life. But in present world cannot help the people for their living. government need to search for better alternative for retired people and their families.
Finally, now in my view there is certain merits and demerits in both agree and disagree views. To remove the unhappiness the government should take the preventive steps for proper way of living the families .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80478087649 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46701597085 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597609561753 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4998723691 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9411764706 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191376556254 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058031720497 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455736475971 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114260575838 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483131396933 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.