Do you think that place where the person grew an influence on his accomplishment. Explain with example.
Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals that place are important for the development of person has been one of the most prominent topics on the contemporary discussion. In my opinion place is helpful where the person grew has an influence on his accomplishments and I will discuss reasons about this arguments in further elaborating paragraphs.
To begin with, there are myriad of reason behind this notion. Firstly, birth place of people offer inspiration as well as critical thinking because which is beneficial for every person to do their perfect goal in their life. Secondly, place play an essential role in individual life because it influence the person to achieve accomplishment. Moreover, person are more familiar about their birth place so they are know about their culture heritage and get knowledge about the history of their place.
In addition to it, place is helpful to grew of person in which they have understand the things into their places so they can easily commute in it as well as eaisly get high paid job. For example, if a student finish their study into own place which they will be teach in school in future time.
In conclusion, birth place plays a vital role of individual life which helpful to achieve better accomplishment in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'influences'?
Suggestion: influences
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
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Message: Use past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94372294372 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.697674892 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4766162753 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.2 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9 7.25397266985 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275996741436 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108203278476 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759165196592 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148440020572 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782574499464 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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