More and more people immigrate to English speaking countries to live, work and study. Why is English such an important international language? Why do people immigrate to the aforementioned countries?
Immigration has always been with mankind. Humans migrate due to various purposes including but not limited to economic reasons, health, security as well as stability. The very same reasons seem to be at the core of what motivates millions of people to head to English speaking countries. Some of these reasons I am going to discuss in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, many people are attracted to salaries offered in English speaking countries. These countries generally pay a lot more than many other countries for different jobs. For example, an Indian doctor may find it very hard to get a decent employment package with a reasonable salary in her native of India. However, the very same doctor is looking at over five thousand pounds a month if she manages to settle down in the United Kingdom. So, it becomes reasonable why many people from poorer economies prefer to move to English speaking countries.
Furthermore, English is the language of international trade and communications. It is officially recognized as the language of banking, of finance and of the internet. Thus, millions of people head to English speaking countries such as America and Australia in a bid to brush up their language skills. For instance, a Chinese student who plans to begin his graduate studies at a high-profile(ranking) university in the United Kingdom is required to sit the IELTS exam and to score more than seven overall at this exam. By taking up this step, this hypothetical Chinese individual will acquire a unique skill-set that can help him get a decent job upon his return to China.
All in all, there are many different reasons why people move to English speaking countries. The reasons may differ depending on where the potential immigrants originate from. However, the majority of people find countries such as United States, Britain, Australia and Canada more desirable for living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10256410256 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84027893316 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580128205128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0003642306 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6470588235 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31564773177 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097054970016 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815757330827 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188937617568 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641247794789 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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