You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows the cinema viewing figures for films by country, in millions.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The table elucidate the comparison cinema viewing figures for movies between india, Ireland, new Zealand, as well as japan. The movies divided into four genres, such as action, romance, comedy, and horror.
Overall, the most movie viewers is india which it reached more than 24 million viewers. On the other hand, another countries also gained more than 20 million viewers, an exception japan which it just gained 17.8 million viewers, the lowest than others.
Furthermore, the most popular movies in every countries is action with the number of viewers in every countries more than 7 million viewers respectively. Moreover, while romance genre is the second popular movies in india and japan which it gained 7.5 and 4.5 million viewers severally, in New Zealand and Ireland it was positioned in the third and the fourth, which it attained 4.5 and 3.8 million viewers respectively.
Hereafter, comedy was assigned as the third popular movies in Ireland, India and Japan, and the fourth in New Zealand. To forward, while horror genre is the second popular movies which it reached more than 6 million viewers, in india and japan it just positioned as the third popular movies, and the fourth in New Zealand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'elucidates'.
Suggestion: elucidates
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...illion viewers severally, in New Zealand and Ireland it was positioned in the thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, moreover, second, so, third, well, while, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10552763819 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41497938943 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472361809045 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2923665672 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.375 5.23603664747 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0310269119791 0.215688989381 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0219769410832 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523345293072 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0311623160526 0.15604864568 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475095146439 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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