Your friend is planning to start an import-export business and has sought your recommendation on a product.
Write a letter to him/her. In your letter, explain:
what product you recommend
why you recommend that product
how it could benefit him/her in business
Dear Rahul,
How are you, I came to know that you are planning for entrepreneurship. I would suggest you go with the restaurant business. In which you can add many products like different meal options, snacks and beverages. Meals will include lunch and dinner. Snacks like potato chips are quite popular these days. Tea, coffee and cold drinks, soups you can select any option or all.
This business is evergreen, especially if it is located near the government offices or student’s center. Food is everyday need for many workers and students around the locality, therefore a good quality and taste can directly benefits the business to rise many folds.
I am confident you will earn good wealth with this business, more importantly, this business will help you to make more contacts in society. Many Non government organizations will be in touch with you after this business, where you can donate as per your wish to contribute in society needs.
I hope this idea will help you in your business and do let me know if you have any questions.
With regards,
Vishal Bhat
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-08-24 | bhatvishal@ | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Rahul, How are you, I came to know that you are...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...soups you can select any option or all. This business is evergreen, especially i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you have any questions. With regards, Vishal Bhat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97267759563 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6739017679 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650273224044 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5958885601 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8333333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184488168883 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650400521864 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527049430159 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121694842274 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418579424282 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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