The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps compare the current university sports centre layout with its future plan after being redeveloped.
In general, there are several main changes regarding the size of the centre and the adding facilities. However, some features will still remain the same after the redevelopment, namely the pool, the changing room, reception and seating area.
To begin with, the sports centre will be extended and will replace the two outdoor courts which are currently situated on the two sides of the building. The gym will be twice the size of its original layout and a new sports hall will also be added into the new plan, next to the seating area. There will be two dance studios placed near the sports hall and the gym, right on the east side of the building.
Compare to the present layout which only contains one changing room, in the future plans, the new sports centre will have two more changing rooms in addition to the current one, each of which will be in the south-west and east-west of the building. Next to the changing rooms, at two sides of the main entrance will be the places of a sports shop and a café accordingly. Finally, for the last renovation, the centre will have a large leisure pool which will be situated on the west side of the building, next to the current changing room.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...e size of its original layout and a new sports hall will also be added into the new pl...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ll be two dance studios placed near the sports hall and the gym, right on the east sid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, finally, however, regarding, so, still, in addition, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67532467532 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30586844617 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463203463203 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0238027789 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 5.23603664747 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176564423832 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953908530921 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03671280444 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133969114418 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337337989092 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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