The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to
adult fish.
The diagram illustrates the stages in the life of the salmon, from birth to
maturity.
It is clear that there are six* main stages as the salmon develops from
egg to mature adult. We can also see that salmon spend time in three
distinct locations during the cycle, moving from river to estuary to ocean
and then back upstream.
Salmon begin their lives in rivers where the adult fish lay and incubate
their eggs. After emerging from eggs, the young salmon spend the next
stage of their lives being reared in freshwater areas. Then, at some point
in their development, the fish swim downstream to river estuaries where
rearing continues.
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Following the estuary rearing period, the maturing salmon migrate to the
ocean, where they eventually become fully grown adults. Finally, the
adult fish travel back upstream to spawning areas of rivers; here they
reproduce and lay their eggs, and the life cycle begins anew.
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- The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visitedfour types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. 84
- The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg toadult fish. 61
- The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. 78
- The first chart below gives information about the money spent byBritish parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014.The second chart shows the number of children who participated inthree sports in Britain over the same time period. 84
- The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg toadult fish. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11976047904 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11137079216 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622754491018 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0270338996 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 3.83414634146 391% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232163802498 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115737270013 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793924349627 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758797579985 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810388655506 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.