Dinosaurs as endotherms
The speaker contradicts with writer about whether the dinosaurs were endotherm or not by using three different points as stated in passage. three points used to contradict the argument were polar dinosaurs, leg position and third is harversian canals.
Firstly, he points out that as per passage fossils of dinosaurs were found at polar region and this indicates that they are endotherms. However according to the speaker ,is a misconception. In reality during warmer period on polar region dinosaurs were staying here and in cooler period like mansoon and cold they would have migrated to warmer places or they were just underwent hibernation process and survived in polar region.
Secondly, she opposes the information given in the passage that leg poisoning bellow stomach is for fast running purpose. running activity comes under physiology of endothermy. legs of modern endotherms are same as above. It is quiet contrary because this leg positioning was made for balancing large body weight and side positioning like lizards and modern reptile can not be compared to endotherms.
Thirdly, he denies the validity of harversian canal because of growth ring found in bones of dinosaurs. growth rings shows growth pattern. The pattern of bone was no or slow growth then faster growth. In the endotherms the growth patterns will be continues fast growth because they maintain their body temp throughout all seasons. So according to speaker the dinosaurs were not endotherms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Three
... different points as stated in passage. three points used to contradict the argument ...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...herms. However according to the speaker ,is a misconception. In reality during wa...
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Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g here and in cooler period like mansoon and cold they would have migrated to war...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Running
...ow stomach is for fast running purpose. running activity comes under physiology of endo...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Legs
... comes under physiology of endothermy. legs of modern endotherms are same as abov...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es under physiology of endothermy. legs of modern endotherms are same as above....
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Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... endothermy. legs of modern endotherms are same as above. It is quiet contrary ...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Growth
...rowth ring found in bones of dinosaurs. growth rings shows growth pattern. The pattern...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...growth pattern. The pattern of bone was no or slow growth then faster growth. In t...
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Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...out all seasons. So according to speaker the dinosaurs were not endotherms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 235.0 270.72406181 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31489361702 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64787554602 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608510638298 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.1168605752 49.2860985944 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2142857143 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06452816374 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181463996597 0.272083759551 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064310379662 0.0996497079465 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872659161186 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102459069639 0.162205337803 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404970193196 0.0443174109184 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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