A young person is going to spend his first day at the office next month. Write a letter to explain what he should do on his first day.
In your letter, you should tell:
– what work should be done in the company
– what he/she will do on the first day of work
– what items/objects he /she needs to take along.
Dear Maria,
I am really glad to assist you with regards to your preparation for the joining day. Firstly, your role is a junior tester under quality assurance domain. Precisely, the major responsibility of your job is to test the software applications and make sure zero-slippage in code reliability and delivery.
Moreover, your first day will be a grand induction day for your work along with your counterparts. Following, you will be assigned to your respective project with your identification code. In addition to that, you have to go through all the company policies and project details, and about employee perks clarification you may consult with your project manager.
On the day of joining, you need to carry the compensation letter as well as offer-letter which sent to your possessed email address. Eventually, have your original government provided identification proof including a passport size photo for your company identity card.
Please feel free to contact me for further information.
All the best,
Valli
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reparation for the joining day. Firstly, your role is a junior tester under quali...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, really, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39263803681 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05690199055 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668711656442 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3987327004 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187201124703 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714164342954 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727665746034 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097804554573 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701593235762 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 8.71597938144 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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