Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go.
Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:
• Say why you would like to go on the trip
• Suggest what you could do to help during the trip
• Ask other questions about the trip
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to hear about an international trip for the students and very humble for your invitation to joining the group. I would like to inform you that, I will be members of this group with my child. I am very happy to be the part of this team because my son does not going outing alone yet. This trip makes him an excellent opportunity to learn and visit different culture and places with the guidelines of such a wonderful teachers and by also care of me.
In my points of view these types of exposure visit will be making significant impacted on student career. So I have some excellent memory about these places where we were going soon. I can be a tour guide for students about places, environment, cultures and people life style etc.
Similarly, I would like to know the detail about our flight time, hotel, daily schedule and travel agent as well. Which help us to prepare our self as a same. And also like to suggest you to circulate the weather condition of our visit places, because of children should pack their clothing accordingly.
Thank you for your cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
Jone
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...be members of this group with my child. I am very happy to be the part of this te...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...rt of this team because my son does not going outing alone yet. This trip makes him a...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent, cultures and people life style etc. Similarly, I would like to know the deta...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...aily schedule and travel agent as well. Which help us to prepare our self as a same. ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, similarly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50885930255 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6792787349 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203605236724 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702544921486 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531266578516 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113673614813 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611667195314 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.