In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. Cashless society seems to be a reality, and how realistic do you think? What are the advantages and disadvantage es of this phenomenon?
Recently, the phenomenon of utilizing credit cards instead of cash in nations and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although this issue is beneficial as it is regarded by the substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponent views. I am inclined to believe that it can be plus as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its adherent.
From a social standpoint, the idea of replacing the credit cards instead of money in daily purchases can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact of development. From my own experience, when I was a pupil university, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these benefits. Firstly, not only using credit cards is quite easy, but also they are supported by the secure system. Furthermore, the money which are used in daily activities is really dirty and can transmit illnesses among their owners. Moreover, due to the security of these cards, the rate of theft including shoplifting is diminished.
On the one hand, there is no doubt the idea of omitting the money for purchasing and using credit cards has some opponents. They asserted that these cards has some difficulties specifically for elderly and very young generation including forgetting their passwords or the process of giving them, if they are lost. Also, some technical or technological problems including networking faults are the other reasons to use cash, because these cards are electric-dependent and based on the internet.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the merits of utilizing credit cards instead of the cash far more outweigh their demerits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ons to use cash, because these cards are electric-dependent and based on the inte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, while, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27075812274 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95835985406 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606498194946 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8767179225 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0884952016423 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340602140039 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0198515592506 0.071462118173 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053371116705 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122765947591 0.0609392437508 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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