Globalization has brought people closely together, especially in culture, communication and business field. What do you think?
Nowadays, there is an ongoing deliberation how globalisation brought people closely together in respect to culture, communication, and business field, which attracted plethora of controversies and drawn the attention from the public. it can be agreed that globalisation provided platform for fast communication and world is shrinking, whereas other side of the people stands with contrary prospective. this essay will elaborate both facets and thus lead to logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriads of reason how globalisation support to come closer all social communities, and the most essential factor is the internet due to the invention of this people has platforms for faster communication and they can shared information with anyone within few clicks. For illustration, the internet is available everywhere including government, industries, schools etc, which facilitate these organisation for fast communication and enable them to share their culture, communication and other business information. Therefore, globalisation plays a vital role to shrink the world.
On the other hand, some people holds contrary viewpoint and believed that globalisation has their adverse effect on culture to destroy their values. Another key justification for their upholding this notion is that due to interconnected people loosing their tradition and adopting other culture practices. For example, In India many new festivals started celebrating and those came from globalisation effect. Hence, globalisation has their own adverse effects on social groups and communities.
Agglomerating all points above, it can be concluded that, globalisation has their own advantages and disadvantages on people and communities, and government as well as people has to handle these situation when it comes to preserve own culture values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as to, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 5.75862068966 417% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88059701493 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25683646166 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.0812962321 50.4703680194 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.272727273 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134788825701 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495731215079 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590110127813 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882316250897 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560324285085 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 12.6369458128 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.12 11.5310837438 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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