You are planning to study abroad. What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
All people who live in their environments and communities sometimes plan on anything such as studying abroad, buying a car, working in a good company or a factory. And, Some of these plans need money and effort highly than some parts of other plans. Then, some plans would be resulted but others not. And, people like or dislike that depends on character of people who plan.
First of all, the plan is a process which made by its owner, it has different stages and parts. All of these parts need different time for their finishing. For example, when people want to go place which not seen them, they would divide their plan to 3 parts including renting vehicle or place, choosing a friend, preferring the place where they go. And, the plan done before its execution time.
Also, let's think that studying abroad. All students study their early years in their schools and their communities where they born. And, they always be their families and old friends, they always face same places such as cinemas, parks, buildings, etc. And, that would be boring, for that reason students' concentrations and performances would be bad in their durable life. In these conditions, so many students would like to different places for their wonderings, and they would like to leave from their families' strict.
In addition, in the same places and with the same friends, people could be a-social, their mental and physiological health could be bad and they would affect negatively. And, their parents would be the worse with their offsprings, these parents have to focus their children' problems, if they do not consider their young-adults their children would be unhealty and a failure on their lessons. Although they have several options which solving their bad issues they usually select studying in different cities, countries too.
In conclusion, taking account of all informations, I definitely agree that statement that children like living, studying, working outside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12383900929 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49160039729 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53560371517 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2088565847 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3529411765 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0666044642381 0.236089414692 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353263185089 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377488763707 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0442869744458 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283419804659 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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