You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
. Give details of your study plans
.Explain why you want to get a part-time job
.Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Write at least 150 words
Dear Anahita,
I hope you are doing well in Canada. You may find it interesting that I have been selected in York University for microbiology course at your place, Ontario. The course is for a 1-year full-time starting from coming September and this course will make me a certified microbiologist.
Although, I need a job to pay my tuition fee for the same course, and for this, I need your help to search for some part-time job. My classes will be from 8:00 AM to 2:00 PM. Hence, I will be free to do any job in the evening. This will also help to make some savings with which I can support my family here in India.
You are aware of my financial conditions; therefore, I request you to please ask your friends also if they know any job near York University. In addition, I have come to know about some vacancies through the internet and I want you to visit these companies personally to deliver my résumé.
I hope you will understand my circumstances and do the needful, waiting for your reply.
With regards,
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...panies personally to deliver my résumé. I hope you will understand my circumstan...
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Line 21, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iting for your reply. With regards, Vishal Bhat
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reply. With regards, Vishal Bhat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66844919786 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6653342015 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609625668449 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9819553115 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3636363636 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298880761676 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107483064679 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079168845645 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18913126713 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364816033563 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.