In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Men and women are gaining unusual weight on average in many countries and there was found to be a dramatic decline in their health and fitness levels. reasons behind this are noticed to be a lack of physical exercising, sedentary lifestyle, overeating which leads to abnormal weight gain. To tackle these origins the clear solutions are outlined below with detailed examples and explanations.
To begin with, the increasing amount of people are found to be living a white-collar lifestyle in modern days, this is making them prone to gain odd weights. The public is lacking time to spend on everyday physical exercise which keeps them healthy and fit. Humans are eating a lot of junk foods as there are many at least one to two on every street they just emerged like mushrooms. Uncontrolled consumption of unhealthy foods will lead to gain fat around the skin which in turn causes many disorders. For example, a study has revealed that people who tend to stay idle will gain more weight than a person who constantly meets around.
On the other hand, preventing this from happening is on everybody's own self by taking care of their own well being. Governments should interfere with junk food chains and charge higher taxes so that it would decrease the demand for fast foods, in turn, it makes patrons avoid them. While working in a software company at least once in an hour a person needs to take a brisk walk for 10 to 15 minutes which makes enough immunity towards getting obese. For instance, Google conducts every half an hour reminders for their employs to take a break and walk in the lawn or garden space, this has proven to yield better productivity than other companies
In conclusion, everybody should aware of causes leading to health and fitness difficulties and take proper measure to avoid them as much as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48449158032 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2535666974 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.75 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152775035429 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537686996707 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052831244706 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10528871646 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510823551735 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.