Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many students rely on universities and colleges to provide ample oppurtunities to them in wide variety of activities for them grow. One way of supporting students is by providing them financial support in the activity they want to pursue be it sports and social activities or classes and libraries. While some people think that indoor activities should receive greater financial support than outdoor activities, others beleive that equal financial support should be given for both indoor and outdoor type activities. I agree that equal financial support should be given to both sports and social activities, as well as classes and libraries.
First, providing equal financial support in sports activities would encourage students to stay fit which will increase their health.
For example, an international student from a poor country cannot afford the cost of participating in sport activities due to financial reasons. Providing financial aid would encourage such students to participate in sports and lead a healthy life without worrying about the cost required to engage in such activities. This will ultimately lead to a healthier overall university campus.
Second, providing equal financial support in social activities will help start new social programs that can organise and provide lectures from astute national personalities regarding different pertaining problems in the world. This will help students to engage in productive debates regarding day to day problems.
For example, an environmental social club, upon receiving equal financial aid from university could afford to invite scientists working in antartica or north pole. These scientists could provide live updates regarding the effect of usage of fossil fuels on climate change.
Thirdly, students would be encouraged to apply the theortical part learned in classes in libraries into the practical world by engaging in social activities. This experience will be important for them in future when they are applying for jobs.
For example, if a team of students of mechanical engineering decide to apply their knowledge into making a model of formula one car to compete in a national robotics competition. This can only be possible if the university provides funding for them. Having this experience will also help them land a good job in the future when they get a degree from a university.
To sum up, i agree that equal financial support should be given to sports and social activities as well as, classes and libraries.
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, second, so, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2139.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47058823529 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82952539897 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488491048593 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4679104718 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.833333333 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7222222222 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258913381849 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978597010068 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988388105822 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137749234891 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102109295386 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.