In some countries, old people are highly valued and in some countries, the young are considered to be more valuable.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Undoubtedly, some country often rely on elder people in the field of work due to their experience and trust, while others always prefer younger people because they are more energetic and physically fit. This essay will discuss both point of views.
To begin with, it is true that many society usually depend on some experienced people such as, politicians and employees. In fact, they may have adequate knowledge and skill in certain area and therefore, people consider them the most. Politicians are also performing well in this field and find success easily. Today, a vast majority of people across the globe basically support with skilful aged people for a better governance take Indian Prime Minister as an example. Moreover, many elder people are even hired by many multinational companies like textile and labour field because they try to maintain trustworthy, polite and sincere at work.
Others, on the other hand, feel that younger people are more kinetic, active and flexible in many industries like marketing and IT field than retired people. This means that in this computer world elder unable to work productively as adults do because they may face myriad of issues in certain fields, for instance, they will face the stiff target, demanding deadline, extra working hours and so on. This elder may not do much owing to the lack of their physical stability. As a result, many people consider that the youngsters would be the best choice to more actively.
To conclude, though some elders really active in some work area, youngsters can apply their performance in numerous way more effectively. Hence, my opinion is that youngsters are far better than elder people in work because they are really fit enough both physically and mentally
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many societies
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Message: Did you mean 'fields'?
Suggestion: fields
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... fit enough both physically and mentally
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12152777778 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47627389198 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7580163011 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.461538462 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159971440781 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644566725973 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484669625366 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112699368621 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337582569014 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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