two pie charts compare the percentage wise share in Turkish economy by various sector's in 2000 and 2016
The two pie charts compare the percentage wise share in Turkish economy by various sector's in 2000 and 2016.
At 24% we can see that agriculture accounted for majority of the contribution to GDP of Turkey in 2000, but this percentage had dropped to 14% by 2016. During the same sixteen year period construction sectors rapidly grow and it's share in economy went from just 3% to 10%. However, similar tradition followed by manufacturing sector. By 2016, in economy 12% share given by manufacturing sector. Throughout the years 2000 to 2016 trade, utilities and transport contribution increased 2%, which was 16% in 2016.
Interestingly, both health/education sector and leisure/hospitality sectors contribute same percentage to economy in 2000. While share of health/education sector remained 17% in 2016, leisure/hospitality contribution fall by 3%. Throughout the years 2000-2016 contribution of government in GDP went from 12% to 9%. Whereas opposite trend in the case of finanace, business and other sectors. In 2000 finance, business and other sectors contribution is 5%, by 2016 contribution increased to 8%.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-08-31 | Sarwan1996 | 78 | view |
- It has become easier and become affordable for people to travel other countries. Do you think it is positive and negative development? 22
- Some people believe that government should spend money on New public buildings rather than renovation old building to what extent do you agree or disagree 81
- Some people think that modern technology is naking people less sociable, while others think it is making them less sociabke. Dicuss both views. 61
- The pie charts show percentage of working adults spent time on different activities. 78
- Demand of food is increasing 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 428, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sectors'' or 'sector's'?
Suggestion: sectors'; sector's
...rs. In 2000 finance, business and other sectors contribution is 5%, by 2016 contributio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49710982659 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5009055978 2.65546596893 132% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57225433526 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6644282807 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4545454545 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448140699032 0.215688989381 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196806339182 0.103423049105 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.241672984101 0.0843802449381 286% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.463945306192 0.15604864568 297% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.331205227968 0.0819641961636 404% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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