School teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of students than parents to what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often asserted that people who adequately trained have significant success in teaching and socialize students compared to their parents. Teachers’ function is essential to expedite student’s improvement. I would say that I completely agree with the education of children in schools with standard facilities and qualified experts.
Although it is undeniable that parents play a prominent role in the up growing their offspring, pedagogy at home are detrimental to their future career. First of all, fathers and mothers hadn't suitably educated and so not experienced to transfer general knowledge to their kids. It is too important to educate students accurately. Additionally, in educational systems, not only remarkably diverse the textbooks for different ages but also most of their officials constantly update their approaches with advanced methods. For these reasons, to bring up to date instructor might be able to exchange new knowledge effectively. Facilitated educational institutions will make students more empowered and creative. For example, various laboratories, as well as well-equipped sports clubs, prepare them for national and international competitions.
Concerning the social aspect, maost of the schools in the subject of socialization of learners are manageable . In other words, pupils interact with their peers and familiarize themselves with social behaviors outdoors. If they are more take part in group activities so the more productive and easily communicate with other they seem. Therefore, studying academically cultivates healthy relationships and a strong sense of community.
In conclusion, despite the equivalently critical of both parents and teachers' parts in the teenager's logical progression, I reckon that teacher’s role is crucial to student’s intellectual and social growth
It is often asserted that people who adequately trained have significant success in teaching and socialize students compared to their parents. Teachers’ function is essential to expedite student’s improvement. I would say that I completely agree with the education of children in schools with standard facilities and qualified experts.
Although it is undeniable that parents play a prominent role in the up growing their offspring, pedagogy at home are detrimental to their future career. First of all, fathers and mothers hadn't suitably educated and so not experienced to transfer general knowledge to their kids. It is too important to educate students accurately. Additionally, in educational systems, not only remarkably diverse the textbooks for different ages but also most of their officials constantly update their approaches with advanced methods. For these reasons, to bring up to date instructor might be able to exchange new knowledge effectively. Facilitated educational institutions will make students more empowered and creative. For example, various laboratories, as well as well-equipped sports clubs, prepare them for national and international competitions.
Concerning the social aspect, maost of the schools in the subject of socialization of learners are manageable . In other words, pupils interact with their peers and familiarize themselves with social behaviors outdoors. If they are more take part in group activities so the more productive and easily communicate with other they seem. Therefore, studying academically cultivates healthy relationships and a strong sense of community.
In conclusion, despite the equivalently critical of both parents and teachers' parts in the teenager's logical progression, I reckon that teacher’s role is crucial to student’s intellectual and social growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, for example, i reckon, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.15185185185 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54277494702 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677777777778 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.414999968 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.733333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0160418891788 0.244688304435 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00485398263459 0.084324248473 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00981953119309 0.0667982634062 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0090004920137 0.151304729494 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110990630013 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.09 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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