The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The fact that could not be denied is fossil fuels are still our chief sources of energy to day and people have not found another energy to completely alternate it. But we have to admit that there are many bad consequences for environment because of using fossil fuels. Therefore, I agree that finding alternative source is certainly the most important global priority.
Using energy from fossil fuels is an essential part that contributed to the success of Industrial Revolution which changed while life of human. Almost countries develop their industries and economies with mass-product machines and vehicles fueled by coal, gas or oil. However, we are now well aware of the environmental drawbacks of over-reliance on fossil fuels. Global warming, acid rain, greenhouse effect and the damage to the protective ozone layer are caused by carbon dioxide released from burning process of fossil fuels. It threatens environment and our life in short and long term.
As a result, reducing dependence on fossil fuels needs efforts from international community because no action by a single country could solve this. While some countries have budgeted for researching and developing alternative such as wind, solar and hydro power, it seems that there has not been sufficient investment in technology to make such alternatives practical for all. For instance, a car used electric instead of oil could not be driven frequently because it does not have enough charging station in city. Exploration environmentally friendly energy sources is a way to achieve sustainable development for this planet and next generations.
To conclude, I completely agree that finding alternative energy to fossil fuels is the most pressing global priority , if not the most important one for our world today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in short, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34982332155 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88491826954 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614840989399 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3550807753 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.461538462 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244415680178 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857426464757 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870524146241 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178278408093 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954771527326 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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