Individual can do nothing to improve the enviroment; only goverment and large companies make differece.what extended do you agree or disagree?
The world has been suffering from the burning issue of global warming which has plays prominent role in global problems,mainly as the result of environment,the authority and giant companies should take conscious step to improve environment. I am partially disagree with this statement and evaluate some causes in below paragraphs.
Paradoxically, individual can play indispensable role to improve the environment .First of all,they stop using of private transportation and then they start using of eco-friendly vehicles such as bicycle . Also they should give us support to the authority and, also make us discipline .Moreover, they start using of paper things rather than plastics and last they should celebrate ecofriendly day .By celebrating eco-friendly day ,masses are aware about what to do and what not to do.
On the other hand , government and large companies can also play a vital role to improve the environment. First step government should start awareness campaign in countryside and urban area to aware about this issue . Also larger companies should make strict norms against some particular products such as plastic. Furthermore,authority should make strict rules and regulation against some self-centric people and also implemented heavy penalties . For instance ,in 2012,CANADA impose a rule that each house grow a one tree infront of house .So that is better way to improve this environment .
Agglomerating all the points elaborated above, it can be concluded that government also helps to improve the environment but individual also play a major role to improve the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, moreover, so, then, for instance, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52032520325 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22218898655 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1247937622 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.8 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164221664001 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636570800043 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044605531873 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095048200217 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255462024885 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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