Your friend wrote a letter to you asking advice on their parents visiting your area. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should:
suggest the places they can visit
recommend a place where they can stay
offer something you can do with them.
Dear Ratul,
It’s really great to know that uncle and aunt are coming over here next month. I’m going to tell you some important information which you can share with them in advance to make the trip more enjoyable and comfortable.
You know Dhaka is an old city and there are lots of ancient landscapes, buildings and parks to visit. I would recommend to go the Lalbag Fort specially which was used for royal meetings hundreds years back. Also the Shaheed Minar and some other monuments which is carrying the significance of our liberation war. In addition, your parents can visit national museum and botanical garden if they want to spend some times quietly.
It would be my pleasure having your parents as my guest and stay at my home but if they feel uncomfortable they there are available hotel facilities. I can help with the booking because they are near around my place and price is also reasonable.
Your father and mother will be my responsibility when they will be here. I will accompany them for the whole stay. If I fail to manage time for some reason, I will guide them with full information.
You don’t need to be worried. They will have a lot of fun.
Best wishes,
Shawan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend going', 'recommend gonna'.
Suggestion: recommend going; recommend gonna
..., buildings and parks to visit. I would recommend to go the Lalbag Fort specially which was use...
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Line 9, column 208, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...for royal meetings hundreds years back. Also the Shaheed Minar and some other monume...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82547169811 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51669399511 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655660377358 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3726959157 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0714285714 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238631188887 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716190481448 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653889497091 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123894732407 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306113798803 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.