The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negatives ones.

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...hrough which one can transfer knowledge.While some think that only positive action...
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...hrough which one can transfer knowledge.While some think that only positive action...
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...fer knowledge.While some think that only positive actions should be considered wh...
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...ties that people endures. It can also be considered as the resultant of our daily...
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...come our difficulties or correct our bad behaviors.Considering these two definiti...
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...culties or correct our bad behaviors.Considering these two definitions i think that both...
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...viors.Considering these two definitions i think that both are importannt in the t...
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... are importannt in the teaching process; to shape human behavior and way of think...
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...aily life and put aside the one that can destroy.Teaching is actually the element...
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...e outcome of human positive action while observing the negative. To sump up, po...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, while, for instance, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0748502994 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96871531487 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494011976048 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.508720289 60.3974514979 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.090909091 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3636363636 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.97078651685 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 46.0 7.80617977528 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211472264942 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891704165817 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671836910543 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685354794754 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633128916352 0.0667264976115 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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