Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults.
Do you agree or disagree?
Dealing with crime has always been a interesting topic of debate since origination of human kind. It is generally thought that juveniles should be punished same as matured man for any serious crime. I completely associate myself from this point of view. I believe that serious crime by teenager should not be neglected any-how. Ideas enunciated further in my discourse will support my point of view.
Discussing few points to support my opinion, the foremost one is that punishment for dangerous offence leads to lower ratio of crime. Society should be free from serious crime. Appropriate punishment is an indeed require to achieve goal of crime free world. Furthermore, criminal should feel guilty about their mistake. Punishment is an imperative step to make offender feel bad. For instance, if criminal of serious offence such as rap, robbery feel really bad after getting punishment. After that they might get awareness toward low breaking activity.
Additionally, I also perceive that criminal mentality is difficult to tackle through soft sentences. There is also possibility of crime repetition by person who is mentally disturb. For example, a person who has already committed crime, that might be do it again if he/she should not be punished. What is more, characteristic of criminal should be change. If criminal stay away from society, there is chance of modifying bad manners into good virtue.
On the other hand, few section of society tend to believe that crime is done by juveniles because of lack of understanding and immaturity. Government should impose rules to forgive them from high punishment. Civic bodies should start campaign to increase understanding of teenagers which will help to decrease rate of crime.
To conclude, It is commented that crime rules should be same for adults and juveniles. I also perceive that it is really true to get crime free environment. It helps to decrease offence and no one will think about committing crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'achieving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: achieving
...opriate punishment is an indeed require to achieve goal of crime free world. Furthermore, ...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...el really bad after getting punishment. After that they might get awareness toward lo...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disturbed'.
Suggestion: disturbed
...me repetition by person who is mentally disturb. For example, a person who has already ...
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Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'changed'?
Suggestion: changed
...e, characteristic of criminal should be change. If criminal stay away from society, th...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun section seems to be countable; consider using: 'few sections'.
Suggestion: few sections
...into good virtue. On the other hand, few section of society tend to believe that crime i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, really, so, for example, for instance, such as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2131661442 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75816111874 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567398119122 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9441720694 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.3043478261 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8695652174 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4347826087 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.9879759519 426% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287028213929 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860919388834 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084903313547 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162218494262 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421662147682 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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