As more and more people move to cities and as cities expand in size, City life loses its appeal
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this
There has been seen more urbanisation in contemporary time than past. In current era, large number of individuals like to migrate to metropolitan which lead to expansion of urban city. A certain class of the society has given emphasis on one thought that urban life has been vanishing due to this. I disassociate myself to a large extent from this point of view. I believe that despite the challenges, city life has its own charm and potential. Ideas enunciated further in my discourse will support my point of view.
Discussing few imperative points to support my opinion, the foremost one is that Employment is one of the main reasons behind the migration of mankind from rural area to urban area. Cities provide better job opportunity to candidate in comparison of the village. Furthermore, possibility of successful business is at high level in metro city because city provide facile availability of resources, funding and labour work. Employer can fetch expert and experienced worker from urban area. For example, metro city such as Mumbai and Delhi attract people more from far and give good opportunity to explore individual.
Additionally, I also perceive that personal growth of an individual usually happens rapidly in metropolitan. In city, people can get chance to interact with person from different state and country, while in village people are normally belong to same community. Individual get to know and understand multicultural people. Individual can learn various virtue, skills for their own. What is more, practical and survival knowledge is provided more by city environment. Person become more rounded and learn how to handle any issue in the life.
However, I have also some contradictory view on this topic. I also admit that city has been losing its charm because of few reason. First one is that over population. Because of high ration of population, problems like competition in job, space, high price to survive occurred in city. Thus, population is main problem for occurring another reasons and it also lead to decreasing value of city.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">In a nut shell, notwithstanding the contradictions, I am of the firm view that city life still holds the energy and the appeal to not only draw people towards it but also justify their existence there. </span>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'few reasons'.
Suggestion: few reasons
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Line 7, column 363, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...r occurring another reasons and it also lead to decreasing value of city. ^^^^
Line 9, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o justify their existence there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22340425532 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01904697472 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601063829787 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2761264922 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3913043478 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.347826087 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4347826087 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277757515943 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707948507184 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815336415129 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137562975672 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333623248963 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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