Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• Explain why you cannot go anymore
• Say who can go instead of you
• Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear friend,
Hello Jone, hope you are doing well. As you know we made a movie plan for upcoming Saturday and also having great weekend together. But due to my office work I have to go site offices for emergency support so I am very sorry to say that I am unable to joining you.
As you know I already book the tow ticket for the same which is non refundable as well. So I would like to request you to make another partner for the theater. Meanwhile, I would like to suggest you my office college MR. Shiva. You also know him, we have great fun last time in club. Actually he is quite interested on this movie too. He loved action movies as well. So I kindly recommended him with you for Saturday show. I already talk with him about it and he is positive about it and he remembers you.
Hope you two have great fun together and I will definitely missing those movements.
Sorry for unconvincing, hopefully you understand my problems.
Yours sincerely,
Rohan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...positive about it and he remembers you. Hope you two have great fun together and...
^^^^
Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'miss'
Suggestion: miss
...reat fun together and I will definitely missing those movements. Sorry for unconvinci...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47752808989 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40900553407 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612359550562 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3845192706 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.9285714286 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7142857143 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31814550864 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111438760706 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433990449929 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168608690054 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516784194135 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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