Nowadays consumer goods have become the most popular part of people's life .what are advantages and disadvantages of this changing trend .Discuss and give opinion.
In this contemporary era,the Cardinal portion of humans' life is purchasing consumable items like mobile phones ,household goods , furniture.change is the law of nature and every change bring with some pros and cons. I contended that buying things is good but it's wisely use also important. Both the views regarding above given statement will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs with my own perspective.
To begin with , prompt having durable products increase the demand it leads to market growth .It's helps into economy growth of nationa.Another pros is , high demand of products results more establishment of companies generate employment opportunities.jobs availability improve the living standard of people.To illustrate, Amazon announced that it but their second biggest office in Hyderabad , India .And this buildnees provide near about 30,000 employment in coming future.
On the other flip side , prompt buying of latest products is not wise decision,it's just wastage of money and it create gap between inferiority. secondly the significant demerit is environmental pollution , Quick having electronic items boost up to its production as a result destroying the old purchased emit the toxic gases which is hazard not only for environment but also for human health.
To conclude, consumer needs to think deliberately about it's invietable before purchasing any thing . Having durable goods is not bad but buying only for maintain status symbol is a foolish decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08990098699 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.715555555556 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.67699867 49.4020404114 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.5 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106599067009 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460136908246 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416015124014 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642214853818 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474161377222 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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